Nice art :) Hopefully maybe your next one will be abit longer?
Decent fight scenes
Well done mate, theres a couple of spelling mistakes in there, the one i noticed the most was when Green boy (lol) was talking to Shadow and said 'saty out of my way.' Im guessin you meant get out of my way? Just major mistype?
But other than that its really good. Not sure what extra sounds you wanted, was v.good with the ones you've got.
thanks, the second one should be better
Was really good
but just to short. I know its a trailer, but I think you should have held out and finished the whole thing really. Very smooth though dude! I just need to learn how to do it all that smooth haha
actually there is alot more of the animation already done.
I just took a segment from the animation for the trailer.
why u stop it there!?!? I wana know what happens haha!!
Uve defo got better
You have really improved in your flash since your first one lol. I cant help but feel that the ending was abit sudden? It was good dont get me wrong tho. good job
thx! how is Sonic TAO coming?
send it me dude! sent you my email in a PM
short yes lol
i cant give much for this as there isnt realiy much to say. But I think you do seem to have a decent Idea for a full flash animation. but one main thing, remember to spellc check. Theres simple mistakes that you've made Im guessing from typing fast? 'This Srping' Just simple mistakes, but sort them out n the grammer people out there will be alot happier lol
I type fast, well i guess its fast, 62wpm?
why submit it if its not finished? theres not really any point. Also if you are re-doing it in flash8, then re-do the sprites as well. Im not sure wot software you used to make this, but I could see the blue background that were on the sprite sheets before you cut them out, on sonic and on the rocks he was jumping on/over.
Try and sort them out for re-doin on flash and you have a good flash there
your getting better
just little things you just need 2 change, you do need 2 spell check before you upload your flashes, 'freind' was spelt wrong a couple of times. (someone already pointed that out in a previous review) also noticed that some of the sprites werent cut out probably and things, the nintendo sign had extra white bits around the edges.
Other than them couple of things you've done well. Spesh after using my sprites you never credited me for
sry man, i didn't kno any of the sprites were rightfuly urs.
of the same thing? why?
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